Sky
By
Lisa A.Williams
Breathing promises
tomorrows to replace,
yesterdays
we still hold close
nurturing the infancy
of our dreams,
afraid if we wake
we will see they
are still just dreams.
We strung ourselves
along
on wings and prayers.
Grounded and silent
we raise our eyes to
the blue
and sometimes stormy
celestial breadth
who even in silence
hears our plea.
This is superb. Much like a glimpse on our everyday thoughts. "Afraid if we wake we will see they are still just dreams." - Brilliant.
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DeleteSilence is the answer, for me anyway. It is both the prayer and the sublime answer . . . "for we know not what we should pray for as we ought" (Romans 8:26).
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting, Libby.
DeleteThis was very powerful... I love how it vibrates to the ending...
ReplyDeleteThere's a strange serenity I get reading these lines...beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Panchali. I really enjoy your poetry, so glad I joined Poets United.
ReplyDeleteI specially like that last 5 lines ~ In silence hopefully we find our peace ~
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DeleteThe silent sky always listens and in that silence, we can find peace! :)
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DeleteBirthing those dreams is such a delicate business. So spot on in how you told it.
ReplyDeletethanks, Jennifer.
DeleteNicely said.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary.
Deletebeautiful lines. breathtaking!
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DeleteI like the sense of contrast you have captured in this poem: tomorrow and yesterday, wake and dream, ground and sky.
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DeleteI think we all are like that...holding on to our past and refusing to wake up from the dreams for tomorrow.
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Deletewonderful lines Lisa! and many thanks for visiting my blog!
ReplyDeleteThank you and your blog is wonderful, will visit again soon.
DeleteGood to come across you!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I came across your blog as well.
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