Night
By
Lisa A.Williams
Beneath this sky I
cannot
recognize myself
so far off in the
distance
disappearing with the
vanishing
light of day.
A rise of feeling,
surges through the
stillness
so dark, not even
shadows dance
as I stand in this
far off place
of knowing.
It seems this expresses feeling away from oneself at times...in that place where not even shadows dance. Well penned.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary.
DeleteBut here in this place you're not alone in the dark knowing.
ReplyDeleteNice Lisa.
Thank you.
DeleteEncouraging last line and that is something I love about the poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Lisa.
Really appreciate your visit to my blog.
Delete'in this far off place
ReplyDeleteof knowing.'
Wow Lisa, you are one of the best at making an ending stick. Great writing!
thank you.
Deleteloved this!
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