Friday, April 12, 2013

Night



Night
By
Lisa A.Williams


Beneath this sky I cannot
recognize myself
so far off in the distance
disappearing with the vanishing
light of day.
A rise of feeling,
surges through the stillness
so dark, not even shadows dance
as I stand in this far off place
of knowing.

10 comments:

  1. It seems this expresses feeling away from oneself at times...in that place where not even shadows dance. Well penned.

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  2. But here in this place you're not alone in the dark knowing.

    Nice Lisa.

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  3. Encouraging last line and that is something I love about the poem.
    Great poem, Lisa.

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    1. Really appreciate your visit to my blog.

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  4. 'in this far off place
    of knowing.'

    Wow Lisa, you are one of the best at making an ending stick. Great writing!

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