Eulogy
By
Lisa A.Williams
We won’t be lived
like some
forgotten morning
whose sunrise
was missed
by the heavy
weighing world
of now,
said the muses
to Father Sky.
To feel timeless,
like an evening
strewn with stars-
not the fallen-
but those
those that rise,
lighting the shadows
where truth hides,
as the flow of words
carves into slated indifference,
as the flow of words
carves into slated indifference,
softening the sharp
edges
of the armor
we have worn
in the age old war
we have waged
within ourselves.
This is moving Lisa. That second stanza has so much wrapped up in it. I love:
ReplyDelete'To feel timeless,
like an evening
strewn with stars'
and
'the flow of words
carves into slated indifference,'
and your ending. Great writing.
Lots to think about here. I would have chosen as favorite lines the ones Poetry Laundry above chose.
ReplyDelete"The age old war we've waged against ourselves." Wow. Lots going on in that line alone.
ReplyDeleteahhhh those wars "waged within ourselves" ... a lovely eulogy ...
ReplyDeleteany chance of you getting rid of the annoying capture code - I finally did about 11 months ago...
Thank you.
DeleteLove this Lisa and the opening is just fantastic a great write.
ReplyDeleteReally appreciate your comment.
DeleteA moving piece of poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI loved this--especially the last stanza--
ReplyDeleteThank you, Audrey!
Deleteaah...loved this, Lisa. The lines flow effortlessly...beautifully! The second stanza is mind blowing...superb!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Panchali. Your comments are always appreciated.
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