DNA
By
Lisa A.Williams
Patterns
woven into
my existence-
Old fears,
hurts and
the loving of things.
How the ancient music
plays-
Am I the only one who
hears my beginnings
in the strings?
I hold all mothers’
pain
inside like an embryo
waiting to be born,
waiting to be
remembered.
I feel the covetous
ache
of my ancestors
to set things right
no longer blind sided
by eons of self
punishing love-
A well worn path
where their ghosts
still linger.
How the ancient music plays-
ReplyDeleteAm I the only one who
hears my beginnings
in the strings?...wow! Gorgeous!
Thanks so much, Janet.
DeleteHow the ancient music plays-
ReplyDeleteAm I the only one who
hears my beginnings
in the strings
As i read this these words really stood out for me. Great feeling and a sense of hope? I like it
Thank you .
Deletethis is beautifully eerie. i could not read it fast enough and could not slow myself down to absorb it i had to read it over LOL!
ReplyDelete" I hold all mothers' pain" a stand alone statement you could spend a life time in its translations.
Thank you. I agree, one could spend a lifetime in the translations of "mothers' pain.
DeleteSometimes it is difficult to break those patterns passed down from generations before. I try very hard not to become my mother.
ReplyDelete'self punishing love'...ouch...I felt that. There is a strength and a hope in this though the 'ghosts still linger'...and I like it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer, always appreciate your comments.
DeleteWow, DNA is the perfect thing someone could come up with thinking of "patterns"! Why didn't I think that?! BTW this poem reminds me of a very sweet song My DNA by Darwin Deez! :) :)
ReplyDeleteI will have to listen to that song, thanks so much for your comment.
DeleteIt definitely takes a strong person to be able to overcome the things one saw / experienced as a child. Parents are strong influences, whether we like it or not.
ReplyDeleteA poignant and a thought provoking piece, Lisa.I loved your work....amazing!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Panchali, really appreciate your comments, love your work as well.
DeleteLisa, thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting. I always visit sites of folks who comment - however late! Funny, I was just writing a note about the DNA I got from my mom, detailed in the poem YOU read!
ReplyDeleteThis is evocative and expansive. The phrase I most related to would be "the covetous ache of my ancestors..." because I understand that, the weight of that load. And they are always with you, so it's not like you can tell them to get lost! Peace, Amy
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Thanks, Amy.
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