Pale Butterflies
By
Lisa A.Williams
Feeling freedom
through
outstretched wings of
imagination,
soaring over the
green sea
feet still touching
soft blades
somehow they knew
they were “flying”.
Cropped
crowns of sun gold
racing against the
wind
in the fields
of backyard magic.
Once grounded,
feeling the brittle
fall
of harsh words and
stinging discipline
wings clipped-
yet always there is a
wishing
to fly again.
So very true that sometimes those harsh words 'clip a person's wings' for a time; hopefully the person WILL be able to overcome them and rise, rise again. A strong poem this morning, Lisa!
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I hope they do fly again. I hope we all do.
ReplyDeleteFeeling freedom through
ReplyDeleteoutstretched wings of
imagination
Great lines - great picture it paints
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the flow of your words
and the wonder...
wings do get clipped-I hope
wonder still grows
:D
Thank you!
DeleteI love what 'backyard magic' evokes...my mind imagines children playing, dancing, laughing in the summer grass. The sadness that sets in 'when grounded' due to what feels like tragic circumstances breaks my heart...but the desire to fly again has wings of hope. And I hope they soar again.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Jennifer, so glad that this is the message this poem revealed. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
DeleteThis poem gently lassoed me in to the wondrous world of an innocent child, then harshly poked me in the stomach, much as the child must have felt when harsh words were spoken! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI really appreciate all of your comments, It definitely inspires me to keep writing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...this reminds me of a famous quote that I'd love to share...
ReplyDelete"It is with words as with sunbeams--the more they are condensed, the deeper they burn. -- Robert Southey
Liked the message it leaves for the readers...:)
Your first stanza conjures the experience of creating poetry. Lovely.
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