Saturday, March 22, 2014

Nightsong



Doesn’t it whisper
in the dark
when all is still
beneath frozen foundations?

Leaving ourselves behind
taking another path
we deemed as destiny
blinded by hope-

Dancing with someone else's
shadow, always dreaming
of the one we sacrificed
her song as distant as stars.



How did we ever forget
the words?


12 comments:

  1. mmm...pathes we chose to leave...in hope of another...only to realize we would have been better off staying where we were

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  2. Dancing with someone else's shadow...so evocative, Lisa. Hard to dance with a shadow when one is really thinking about someone else.

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  3. it's better not to pay heed to the nightsong...nicely done :)

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  4. To dance with someone's shadow... yes I can see how that's a way to loose the words.. somehow we have to learn to see our own shadow.

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  5. "dancing with someone else's shadow" love that...abandoning one's self happens too often...beautiful piece

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  6. how did we ever forget the words... the question lingers on...

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  7. So beautiful and arresting: "how did we ever forget the words?"

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  8. Id think that dreaming of "of the one we sacrificed" does not bode well for the future.

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  9. Strongly moving piece Lisa. Beautiful.

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  10. Leaving one's own bliss behind is never a path toward wisdom, is it?

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  11. Thank you everyone, always so nice to hear from you.

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