Thursday, October 3, 2013

Evening Song




Evening Song


Here on Earth-
tender is the Night

The Moonstone
housekeeping
the Sheltering Sky.



Posted for deverse pub- " Spine Poetry"

36 comments:

  1. Love the titles words for the evening song ~ Excellent work on spine poetry ~

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  2. there is a nice and smooth flow to this....oh the gentle nights in the moon shine...they do bring comfort...smiles

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  3. Thank you Brian, really enjoyed yours as well.

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  4. Very Beautiful - using the Fitzgerald was brilliant.

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  5. Really thought-provoking, Lisa.

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  6. This was lovely...and I do like everything relating to the moon and sky..

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  7. Very organized and I enjoyed reading here.

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  8. Perfection, Lisa. Nothing less.

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  9. The Moonstone
    housekeeping
    the Sheltering Sky....oh i like this much lisa

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  10. It has a calming and blaming effect:)

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    1. Something very calming about the night sky. Thank you for your comment.

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  11. Beautiful! This has a mythology feel-love it~

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  12. Moonstone housekeeping... that's my kind of housekeeping. Wonderful and tender.

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  13. This has such a beautiful feel to it.

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  14. This has such a soft and romantic feel to it. My library could never produce a poem like this; there are way too many murder mysteries in there ... smiles

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    1. At first I looked through some of my daughter's books and decided against using the Series of Unfortunate Events. Thank you for your comment.

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  15. ...sigh...just perfectly beautiful. You rocked it.

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    1. Thanks Jennifer. This was a fun prompt, at first I thought no way can I do this.

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  16. This has such a soft, lilting, lovely cadence to it... a simplicity that whispers that all is right with the world, after all.

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    1. Something so comforting about a moonlit sky, does make one feel that "all is right with the world." Thank you.

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  17. This is absolutely beautiful Lisa wow love what you've done

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    1. Thank you, looking forward to tomorrow's prompt, hopefully I can come up with something.

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