Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Ocean (re-posted from 2012)




Ocean
by
Lisa A. Williams


Ocean-

In your sound
I am silent.

In your depths
I feel forever.

30 comments:

  1. You have captured the timeless wonder of the ocean beautifully!

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  2. Lisa,

    Your words remind me of exactly how I felt, when standing by the edge of The Pacific Ocean for the first time....

    Eileen

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  3. You have captured that feeling in so few words, great poem.

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  4. A few words , but they speak an ocean:)

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  5. Lisa this absolutely gorgeous and so moving =) You are outstanding!

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  6. ...this is excellent... and it reminds me of the 6-word poem/story by Hemingway... short & complete... simple & complex... all at the same time & shape.... loved it... smiles...

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  7. How crisp this one is...awesome!:)

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  8. This is fantastic - not one superfluous word.

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  9. Beautifully executed and obviously easily related to. Memorable for its brevity and simple power,

    Elizabeth

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  10. Ocean the best music for my ears....captured great!

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  11. nice...really evocative short...
    well played minimalism....

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  12. The ocean is an excellent metaphor ~ Beautifully written ~

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  13. Wonderful economy of words, a beautiful write. ~peace, Jason

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  14. Taking our kids to the ocean for the first time next week. Can't wait for them to experience this!

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    1. Such a wonderful experience to take your kids to the ocean for the first time, what a beautiful memory you will have. Thanks for stopping by.

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  15. 4 lines but so powerful.keep it up

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  16. In so little words you have expressed how I feel....beautifully written.

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