Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Ocean (re-posted from 2012)




Ocean
by
Lisa A. Williams


Ocean-

In your sound
I am silent.

In your depths
I feel forever.
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25 comments:

  1. MaryAugust 7, 2013 at 6:22 AM

    You have captured the timeless wonder of the ocean beautifully!

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  2. Brother OllieAugust 7, 2013 at 7:03 AM

    perfect - nice tight poem

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  3. Eileen T O'Neill .....August 7, 2013 at 7:20 AM

    Lisa,

    Your words remind me of exactly how I felt, when standing by the edge of The Pacific Ocean for the first time....

    Eileen

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  4. Sumana RoyAugust 7, 2013 at 8:01 AM


    nicely done.

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  5. ScottlBAugust 7, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    You have captured that feeling in so few words, great poem.

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  6. Vandana SharmaAugust 7, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    A few words , but they speak an ocean:)

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  7. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    Lisa this absolutely gorgeous and so moving =) You are outstanding!

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  8. kelvin s.m.August 7, 2013 at 10:35 AM

    ...this is excellent... and it reminds me of the 6-word poem/story by Hemingway... short & complete... simple & complex... all at the same time & shape.... loved it... smiles...

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  9. PanchaliAugust 7, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    How crisp this one is...awesome!:)

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 7, 2013 at 2:39 PM

    This is fantastic - not one superfluous word.

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  11. Jennifer WagnerAugust 7, 2013 at 3:02 PM

    Yes!

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  12. Lisa WilliamsAugust 7, 2013 at 3:19 PM

    Thank you everyone!

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  13. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    Beautifully executed and obviously easily related to. Memorable for its brevity and simple power,

    Elizabeth

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  14. humbirdAugust 7, 2013 at 3:50 PM

    Ocean the best music for my ears....captured great!

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  15. Brian MillerAugust 7, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    nice...really evocative short...
    well played minimalism....

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  16. GraceAugust 7, 2013 at 5:33 PM

    The ocean is an excellent metaphor ~ Beautifully written ~

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  17. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 5:50 PM

    Wonderful economy of words, a beautiful write. ~peace, Jason

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  18. kchripczukAugust 7, 2013 at 5:57 PM

    Taking our kids to the ocean for the first time next week. Can't wait for them to experience this!

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    1. Lisa A. WilliamsAugust 9, 2013 at 1:33 PM

      Such a wonderful experience to take your kids to the ocean for the first time, what a beautiful memory you will have. Thanks for stopping by.

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  19. kalpana solsiAugust 8, 2013 at 3:03 AM

    4 lines but so powerful.keep it up

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  20. UnknownAugust 8, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    Yes! the ocean does that to you...

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  21. Mademoiselle ModelleAugust 8, 2013 at 10:37 AM

    In so little words you have expressed how I feel....beautifully written.

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