You have captured the timeless wonder of the ocean beautifully!
perfect - nice tight poem
Lisa,Your words remind me of exactly how I felt, when standing by the edge of The Pacific Ocean for the first time....Eileen
You have captured that feeling in so few words, great poem.
A few words , but they speak an ocean:)
Lisa this absolutely gorgeous and so moving =) You are outstanding!
...this is excellent... and it reminds me of the 6-word poem/story by Hemingway... short & complete... simple & complex... all at the same time & shape.... loved it... smiles...
How crisp this one is...awesome!:)
This is fantastic - not one superfluous word.
Thank you everyone!
Beautifully executed and obviously easily related to. Memorable for its brevity and simple power,Elizabeth
Ocean the best music for my ears....captured great!
nice...really evocative short...well played minimalism....
Thank you Brian.
The ocean is an excellent metaphor ~ Beautifully written ~
Wonderful economy of words, a beautiful write. ~peace, Jason
Taking our kids to the ocean for the first time next week. Can't wait for them to experience this!
Such a wonderful experience to take your kids to the ocean for the first time, what a beautiful memory you will have. Thanks for stopping by.
4 lines but so powerful.keep it up
Yes! the ocean does that to you...
In so little words you have expressed how I feel....beautifully written.
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