In a proud fire
she burned
clad in ashen righteousness.
Martyrdom-
she never sought
it found her
clenching fairness
from the game.
Winning
was always the goal
but being right
left a scorching heat
melting away all the victory.
Standing alone
with her prize
she wondered
if a curse had not been
bestowed upon her
as she blew the ashes
into the still air
suffocating in their
lingering dust-
And the years still
remained the same.
Lisa,
ReplyDeleteThis poem reminds me of a close relative. Similar behaviours and happy to be so.
Eileen
Being right can come at a hefty price....Great piece!!
ReplyDeleteOh wow Lisa powerful words!
ReplyDeletethere is a sadness there in the end....
ReplyDeletei agree with susie...being right is not always the best
Sometimes it's lonely to live like that.
ReplyDeleteAnd the years still remained the same: sad, but we can't change the past. Better to concentrate on the now.
ReplyDeleteSad and lonely...winning isn't everything...I know some too well that alienate others simply because they must always be "right". Poignant and well written Lisa.
ReplyDeleteWhew, I wonder sometime if winning is everything...
ReplyDeleteWhat price is winning if all we will get in the ashes are ashes ~ Thought provoking write here Lisa ~
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's not about being right, but the way you win... I have met people like that, and sometimes I wonder if I see myself a little ...
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem. To compromise or to take the moral high ground that is the question. A pyrrhic victory is never good. The best victory is to be detached and genuinely not caring if you win or not.
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