Phyllis
We don’t speak of it-
the loss silencing
our world.
How arrogant of the
sun
to rise
when we were facing
the black hole emptiness
beyond,
not enough breathing
space
for our own grieving.
Some pain can’t be
shared,
sometimes we are
islands
surrounded by
restless current
fearing if we were to
plunge
we’d breathe in
anothers tears
and drown.
It was good to love
you,
but oh how the earth
trembled
when we had to say goodbye.For deverse 10/10/13 Friends
mmm strong write...strong sentiment...the how dare the sun....smiles...i have felt that...and while we can not hare i think we can know we have all been there....good byes are never easy....
ReplyDeleteSaying good-bye is never easy to one that we love. But it is good to have loved.......and to have the memories.
ReplyDeleteThe last 3 lines, very moving Lisa ~ Some pain can't just be shared ~
ReplyDelete"It was good to love you" Moving toward that line and then away I feel the pain and the love.
ReplyDeleteSo sad... great ending.
ReplyDeleteGut wrenching, Beautiful, Touching...I could go on and on.
ReplyDeleteYou know I love this one...I remember reading it when you posted it initially...so moving, Lisa.
ReplyDeleteStunning piece! touching
ReplyDeleteHow does the sun dare to rise? -- a terrible statement - but that is such it feels. A sadness that is desperate.
ReplyDeletePowerful and moving poem you words are always perfectly chosen, filled with emotion
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