tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post7703162504137483084..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: August (reposted from 2012)Lisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-78272177313756462722013-09-06T18:31:47.115-07:002013-09-06T18:31:47.115-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-50690688230913738792013-09-06T18:31:25.838-07:002013-09-06T18:31:25.838-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-1989081700247115782013-09-06T18:30:04.506-07:002013-09-06T18:30:04.506-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-71640148459880993992013-09-06T18:29:34.370-07:002013-09-06T18:29:34.370-07:00thank you.thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-43850631536663732332013-08-06T08:55:28.383-07:002013-08-06T08:55:28.383-07:00This is lovely Lisa you have definitely captured t...This is lovely Lisa you have definitely captured the feel of Autumn,, I love the form as well =). I am not sure if you received my response as you know my writing tends to be dark and I understand having had an abusive childhood that childhood can drag up some painful and terrifying memories so don't worry if your poem is dark. Many of the entries are a little on the dark side actually. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-40261701329285952312013-08-05T22:06:22.784-07:002013-08-05T22:06:22.784-07:00"It is I who would be different..." Yes..."It is I who would be different..." Yes and brava! The seasons SEEM to change, but only one to another... the actual Fall is pretty much the same each year, and our response to winter grows more hostile with every passing year! This was a lovely etheree, Lisa. AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/08/03/block-party-ekphrasis-poem/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-36143350687558182632013-08-05T20:02:03.529-07:002013-08-05T20:02:03.529-07:00You captured melancholic mood... nature temper...f...You captured melancholic mood... nature temper...from summer to fall, August - to September... nice...sad...beautiful...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-15161426073233665402013-08-05T17:31:31.092-07:002013-08-05T17:31:31.092-07:00It is a bittersweet month, love summer but it will...It is a bittersweet month, love summer but it will be nice to get back to a routine as well. Thank you Laurie.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-84692725617618849402013-08-05T17:30:31.070-07:002013-08-05T17:30:31.070-07:00Thanks Jennifer.Thanks Jennifer.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-82868305793119140522013-08-05T17:26:18.864-07:002013-08-05T17:26:18.864-07:00Yes. Yes. Yes. You have captured August!Yes. Yes. Yes. You have captured August!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-81532685344207198292013-08-05T14:46:18.298-07:002013-08-05T14:46:18.298-07:00It's a bittersweet time, isn't it? I hate ...It's a bittersweet time, isn't it? I hate to see summer end, but then again, I'm ready for school to start back up (kids are too).Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-38378394466280812742013-08-05T10:51:38.526-07:002013-08-05T10:51:38.526-07:00This poem captures the way August days feel! And ...This poem captures the way August days feel! And I loved the truer than true ending. Lovely!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/08/04/salt-and-pepper/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-5778104027440576982013-08-05T08:22:23.267-07:002013-08-05T08:22:23.267-07:00I too like the form. And the sentiment wrapped up ...I too like the form. And the sentiment wrapped up in the mixed feelings about August and it's signal to summer approaching its end. In my part of the country, the cool of the night already takes longer to dissipate into the warmth of the day. Change indeed happens. And we all feel it in ourselves. PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-71498476218053189222013-08-04T20:59:45.337-07:002013-08-04T20:59:45.337-07:00love the contrast in the closing line.love the contrast in the closing line.Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-80337462816179435032013-08-04T13:06:21.802-07:002013-08-04T13:06:21.802-07:00Thank you Sherry.Thank you Sherry.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-27964517656791566912013-08-04T13:05:57.755-07:002013-08-04T13:05:57.755-07:00Very much appreciate your comment.Very much appreciate your comment.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-30381080960364702222013-08-04T13:05:25.278-07:002013-08-04T13:05:25.278-07:00Such a nice comment, thank you.Such a nice comment, thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-67152238867251037702013-08-04T13:04:27.482-07:002013-08-04T13:04:27.482-07:00Thank you Brian. Thank you Brian. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-73816565570152400522013-08-04T13:03:36.184-07:002013-08-04T13:03:36.184-07:00There is a sadness for me as well when August arri...There is a sadness for me as well when August arrives, wish summer lasted a bit longer. Thank you Mary, always nice to hear from you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-7060303249206676682013-08-04T10:22:06.853-07:002013-08-04T10:22:06.853-07:00Love the way you closed this, it spoke so loudly t...Love the way you closed this, it spoke so loudly to me!Dances With Vodkahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17826849421762801692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-79348131253808558832013-08-04T09:24:31.188-07:002013-08-04T09:24:31.188-07:00Love this poem, which works so well in this form! ...Love this poem, which works so well in this form! Bravo!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-37053138012321480962013-08-04T09:15:58.982-07:002013-08-04T09:15:58.982-07:00beautiful.. the ending is lovely and truthful.beautiful.. the ending is lovely and truthful.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-59001980987393829752013-08-04T05:56:43.531-07:002013-08-04T05:56:43.531-07:00a lovely and elegant poem.
the ending line is so s...a lovely and elegant poem.<br />the ending line is so strong, and true.<br />love the shape of the poem too, looks like a sailboat to me. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-81982144008057991132013-08-04T05:49:41.767-07:002013-08-04T05:49:41.767-07:00Lovely and enjoyed the pyramidic structure. Lovely and enjoyed the pyramidic structure. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-19939239138490772552013-08-04T05:45:24.421-07:002013-08-04T05:45:24.421-07:00nice...august, on the cusp of fall...the seasons c...nice...august, on the cusp of fall...the seasons changing...in their regular pattern to return the next year...along the way, we are the ones changing...i like...smiles...happy sundayBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com