tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post6284797935985280207..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: Lady Blue (MLM prompt 17 optimist, pessimist, realist)Lisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-37728469937497816322013-09-01T18:28:16.619-07:002013-09-01T18:28:16.619-07:00Thank you everyone!Thank you everyone!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70403103567165871452013-08-21T17:05:56.021-07:002013-08-21T17:05:56.021-07:00Lady Blue... she must be related to The Black Dog....Lady Blue... she must be related to The Black Dog. Menacing, they. Nicely done, Lisa.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-36767611916489951602013-08-20T09:25:49.351-07:002013-08-20T09:25:49.351-07:00I am so in tune with this poem as it has all that ...I am so in tune with this poem as it has all that I like....lady, blue, looking glass!Mademoiselle Modellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-75058451920232121852013-08-19T20:44:41.851-07:002013-08-19T20:44:41.851-07:00"If you were to say them/wouldn't the wor..."If you were to say them/wouldn't the world shudder," a moving, powerful statement. Lady Blue in the looking glass... a telling piece, Lisa. AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-66310042726995558472013-08-19T11:45:54.899-07:002013-08-19T11:45:54.899-07:00lyrical, especially how you employed couplets and ...lyrical, especially how you employed couplets and then offset the quatrain near the end. ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-4480728001267713742013-08-19T09:38:13.450-07:002013-08-19T09:38:13.450-07:00I can relate to Lady Blue's silence, unspoken ...I can relate to Lady Blue's silence, unspoken thoughts, and her encountering unkind years ..........beautiful expressionsSumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-45771960399305224432013-08-19T05:47:46.058-07:002013-08-19T05:47:46.058-07:00enjoyable read...honest enjoyable read...honest George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-46724727886981899702013-08-18T23:23:41.904-07:002013-08-18T23:23:41.904-07:00An absolute favourite. This poem has so many shade...An absolute favourite. This poem has so many shades to it, and some brilliant lines. I loved it. Very well penned.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-12387655393786346692013-08-18T22:46:20.493-07:002013-08-18T22:46:20.493-07:00Such a beautiful piece..honest, vulnerable. Such a beautiful piece..honest, vulnerable. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-37096351696018299012013-08-18T20:56:29.732-07:002013-08-18T20:56:29.732-07:00All resides in usAll resides in usVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-14624394407332203412013-08-18T20:04:01.750-07:002013-08-18T20:04:01.750-07:00Thank you Eileen. Thank you Eileen. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-1890021359886443382013-08-18T20:03:23.468-07:002013-08-18T20:03:23.468-07:00I think you're right real love would never hur...I think you're right real love would never hurt us so deeply and self love is the most healing of all. Thank you so much for your comment.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-55726182936225896622013-08-18T14:32:01.338-07:002013-08-18T14:32:01.338-07:00Lisa,
Such profound, honest and realistic words. ...Lisa,<br /><br />Such profound, honest and realistic words. I think we have all encountered Lady Blue, at some point!!!<br />Marvellously wonderful writing Lisa:)<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-32822307436528532292013-08-18T12:42:07.064-07:002013-08-18T12:42:07.064-07:00Thank you Grace.Thank you Grace.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-28742816754143288362013-08-18T12:41:39.646-07:002013-08-18T12:41:39.646-07:00Thank you Brian.Thank you Brian.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-81369414559680188062013-08-18T12:41:02.898-07:002013-08-18T12:41:02.898-07:00Thank you Mary.Thank you Mary.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-83701165362735201782013-08-18T12:40:29.426-07:002013-08-18T12:40:29.426-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-2163305159581592492013-08-18T12:37:56.769-07:002013-08-18T12:37:56.769-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-79013822821445850662013-08-18T12:37:31.015-07:002013-08-18T12:37:31.015-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-22023651561719518002013-08-18T12:27:15.471-07:002013-08-18T12:27:15.471-07:00Lisa this is incredible I really love "Lady B...Lisa this is incredible I really love "Lady Blue" and "in the depths of a sought perfection" this poem feels so vulnerable, you are amazing Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-84275869124090318212013-08-18T10:16:49.943-07:002013-08-18T10:16:49.943-07:00darkly through the glass we sometimes see new ligh...darkly through the glass we sometimes see new light. Excellent work Lisa. Enjoyed this very much.Scott Matthewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16409959261704669866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-55876735303098507142013-08-18T09:18:24.032-07:002013-08-18T09:18:24.032-07:00Dare, dare. In the end truth is what we have to t...Dare, dare. In the end truth is what we have to take with us beyond the looking glass. Beautifully done and haunting.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-55892649798473805222013-08-18T09:14:52.708-07:002013-08-18T09:14:52.708-07:00This spoke to me of the courage it takes to overco...This spoke to me of the courage it takes to overcome weaknesses and hardships in life, and perhaps depression which can haunt one regardless. And to stare down the demons! Beautiful poem, Lisa!Wabi Sabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/08/18/if-only-she-had-stayed/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-27640828228307479822013-08-18T07:07:51.835-07:002013-08-18T07:07:51.835-07:00Oooh! I loved this. Yes, bare bone truth...not man...Oooh! I loved this. Yes, bare bone truth...not many would ever dare utter. This was fabulous!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-88241464991826210852013-08-18T06:12:58.138-07:002013-08-18T06:12:58.138-07:00" Thoughts not spoken
fear holds them captive..." Thoughts not spoken<br />fear holds them captive.".. lovely way of putting it... and i agree it is rather haunting.. beautiful.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.com