tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post6122621644338355146..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: The River (For Ella)Lisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-5082435071634618812013-09-01T18:10:44.794-07:002013-09-01T18:10:44.794-07:00Thank you Jennifer. Thank you Jennifer. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-40182958294542302742013-09-01T18:10:01.112-07:002013-09-01T18:10:01.112-07:00Thank you Loredana.Thank you Loredana.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-26781473624547747022013-09-01T06:28:27.629-07:002013-09-01T06:28:27.629-07:00Heartbreaking. I had my daughter right as my grand...Heartbreaking. I had my daughter right as my grandmother who was like a mother to me died and I didn't have a chance to grieve it is devastating Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70533701086260679252013-08-30T15:28:59.195-07:002013-08-30T15:28:59.195-07:00I love that you wrote for her! This is important ...I love that you wrote for her! This is important work, I think...writing for someone else's pain, writing what someone else was unable to communicate about. So glad you did not delete this! Brava, lady.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-50079915750487110822013-08-29T09:46:51.130-07:002013-08-29T09:46:51.130-07:00Thank you Susie.Thank you Susie.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-57584292302164106032013-08-28T21:24:30.713-07:002013-08-28T21:24:30.713-07:00Powerful Lisa, that ending was so heart wrenchingPowerful Lisa, that ending was so heart wrenchingSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-6827761542257500752013-08-28T21:23:36.083-07:002013-08-28T21:23:36.083-07:00Powerful Lisa, that ending was so heart wrenchingPowerful Lisa, that ending was so heart wrenchingSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-49021854161347296302013-08-28T20:06:07.050-07:002013-08-28T20:06:07.050-07:00Thank you Laurie.Thank you Laurie.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-1321140545924663752013-08-28T19:44:27.902-07:002013-08-28T19:44:27.902-07:00Wow... powerful and heartfelt poem, Lisa!Wow... powerful and heartfelt poem, Lisa!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-16836765009399302192013-08-28T19:06:15.199-07:002013-08-28T19:06:15.199-07:00Thank you Jennifer. I was tempted to delete it fro...Thank you Jennifer. I was tempted to delete it from my blog, it's not getting many comments, I think it's just too sad for a lot of readers but I think my grandmother would appreciate me telling her story, one no one wanted to talk about. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-81111260897451810772013-08-28T18:49:05.745-07:002013-08-28T18:49:05.745-07:00Wow Lisa, a stirring piece with such a strong endi...Wow Lisa, a stirring piece with such a strong ending. Reading your process notes struck me in the heart!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-7436191899836781182013-08-28T15:47:17.020-07:002013-08-28T15:47:17.020-07:00Thank you. I wasn't sure about posting this on...Thank you. I wasn't sure about posting this one, it was based on my Grandmother losing her son who drowned in the St.Lawrence river when he was very young. Having ten other children, I don't think she had time to truly grieve. A very difficult one to write.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-3829802444092790412013-08-28T15:44:29.693-07:002013-08-28T15:44:29.693-07:00Thank you Loredana. Thank you Loredana. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-5182677410673306012013-08-28T00:01:33.511-07:002013-08-28T00:01:33.511-07:00Oh wow Lisa you have an amazing gift (the greatest...Oh wow Lisa you have an amazing gift (the greatest gift a poet could have) the power to stir the human heart with your words. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-63351772596286958722013-08-27T16:45:42.731-07:002013-08-27T16:45:42.731-07:00Thank you so much Mary. Thank you so much Mary. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-23098150703961023072013-08-27T16:39:55.767-07:002013-08-27T16:39:55.767-07:00Simply beautiful!Simply beautiful!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com