tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post61152823666844502..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: Morning TheftLisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-22524814742884910242013-07-31T15:44:29.090-07:002013-07-31T15:44:29.090-07:00Thank you, always nice to hear from you.lThank you, always nice to hear from you.lLisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-92221000231208153692013-07-31T11:34:39.099-07:002013-07-31T11:34:39.099-07:00Ungrateful
we close the space
where time heals the...Ungrateful<br />we close the space<br />where time heals the wound.<br /><br />Chasm deep-<br />we feed on that sorrow<br /><br />You've uncovered a deep truth here. We may need to be reminded of sorrow in order to experience its opposite, joy.janetldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17815491049216208161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-66614955136904038262013-07-31T09:00:06.141-07:002013-07-31T09:00:06.141-07:00Some things are so painful, it takes years to come...Some things are so painful, it takes years to come to terms with them. Thank you for your comment, all the best.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-61059205258607747422013-07-31T08:57:36.112-07:002013-07-31T08:57:36.112-07:00Thank you Jennifer.Thank you Jennifer.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-14461059524457787962013-07-31T08:56:18.467-07:002013-07-31T08:56:18.467-07:00Thank you for commenting Susie.Thank you for commenting Susie.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-26865438374517048462013-07-31T08:52:51.909-07:002013-07-31T08:52:51.909-07:00Thank you Hank.Thank you Hank.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-20382592582916574812013-07-31T08:52:30.602-07:002013-07-31T08:52:30.602-07:00Thank you, hope you have a wonderful week as well....Thank you, hope you have a wonderful week as well.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-9862879896688274052013-07-31T08:51:52.976-07:002013-07-31T08:51:52.976-07:00I really appreciate your comment. I really appreciate your comment. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-56150203254136314932013-07-31T06:30:20.019-07:002013-07-31T06:30:20.019-07:00"We close the space where time heals the woun..."We close the space where time heals the wound..." Sometimes, we sort of wallow in it, the pain, the loss. Sometimes, we cannot bear to look at the wound in the first place.<br /><br />This poem packed a punch, Lisa; it reminded me of the years I struggled to understand that incest by way of my father was not my fault. A heavy abyss of a poem, yet so moving. AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/07/31/hellish-mind-music/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-13328942924746204012013-07-30T00:27:18.286-07:002013-07-30T00:27:18.286-07:00Whew...this is so felt, so deep and so achingly go...Whew...this is so felt, so deep and so achingly good. I love your writing Lisa.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70660759943449551772013-07-29T23:40:07.504-07:002013-07-29T23:40:07.504-07:00So melancholy and evocative. So melancholy and evocative. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70192482604176760022013-07-29T18:35:45.733-07:002013-07-29T18:35:45.733-07:00This is very moving. I felt the depth of emotion ...This is very moving. I felt the depth of emotion keenly... and the despair at the end. So sad but well expressed!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-15533720985876317312013-07-29T11:24:09.075-07:002013-07-29T11:24:09.075-07:00Such melancholy in this...healing can take such a ...Such melancholy in this...healing can take such a long time...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-13470928511924878662013-07-28T23:37:53.315-07:002013-07-28T23:37:53.315-07:00strange but it's true,
cause it often happens,...strange but it's true,<br />cause it often happens,<br />you try and comfort it<br />and the hurt deepens.<br /><br />Very true,we seldom give the hurt space to heal...very poignant. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356682434301279963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-91165570647112628522013-07-28T18:13:39.672-07:002013-07-28T18:13:39.672-07:00How time just flies and one is all the more poorer...How time just flies and one is all the more poorer for letting it go! Happens all the time! Sad! Nicely Lisa!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-82352716137439802492013-07-28T18:12:08.930-07:002013-07-28T18:12:08.930-07:00I feel the depth of your emotions ~ This is heavy...I feel the depth of your emotions ~ This is heavy Lisa and I hope you find your peace ~ Cheers for a wonderful week ahead ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-62013715283260276172013-07-28T16:27:09.111-07:002013-07-28T16:27:09.111-07:00Thank you Laurie.Thank you Laurie.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-80932982780949732382013-07-28T16:26:18.894-07:002013-07-28T16:26:18.894-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-75470654824605750142013-07-28T15:19:31.989-07:002013-07-28T15:19:31.989-07:00Ungrateful
we close the space
where time heals the...Ungrateful<br />we close the space<br />where time heals the wound.<br /><br />like this Lisa powerful indeed<br />ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-47361268771954383232013-07-28T11:53:31.684-07:002013-07-28T11:53:31.684-07:00At first I thought the last line read theft of a n...At first I thought the last line read theft of a newborn baby... still very sad. I like the idea of sorrow as shipwrecked.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-31504205263818719942013-07-28T10:23:51.350-07:002013-07-28T10:23:51.350-07:00Thank you Sherry.Thank you Sherry.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-53394597558806728712013-07-28T10:22:24.314-07:002013-07-28T10:22:24.314-07:00"Chasm deep, we feed on that sorrow"......."Chasm deep, we feed on that sorrow".....powerful image the "theft" of the morning. Wowzers!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-11944431934776054682013-07-28T10:11:53.033-07:002013-07-28T10:11:53.033-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-31912860018363358832013-07-28T10:10:35.242-07:002013-07-28T10:10:35.242-07:00Thank you so much, such an honor coming from one o...Thank you so much, such an honor coming from one of my favorite poets.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-27754806808912130702013-07-28T10:09:54.920-07:002013-07-28T10:09:54.920-07:00The sadness is threaded through your poem like fin...The sadness is threaded through your poem like fine silk.<br />So beautifully human.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06533340171645309120noreply@blogger.com