tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post5817516735850237769..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: MermaidLisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-53141640432311428002013-06-12T00:15:01.102-07:002013-06-12T00:15:01.102-07:00So well penned Lisa. Beautifully done!So well penned Lisa. Beautifully done!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-6495349001764801712013-06-11T17:41:53.803-07:002013-06-11T17:41:53.803-07:00I so love your work Lisa--this feels magical to me...I so love your work Lisa--this feels magical to meAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-50446811972424447532013-06-10T17:49:00.003-07:002013-06-10T17:49:00.003-07:00Thank you everyone for your comments.Thank you everyone for your comments.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-5198639087791577922013-06-10T09:59:57.107-07:002013-06-10T09:59:57.107-07:00Wonderful emotional equation. Really like the &quo...Wonderful emotional equation. Really like the "fins of forever" and several other lines. Soothing imagery, like the sea itself, at times.<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/06/10/fishing-for-memories/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-35206921543842724952013-06-10T07:53:52.664-07:002013-06-10T07:53:52.664-07:00ethereal.
i can see why the land is jealous. :)ethereal. <br />i can see why the land is jealous. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-58101629165589573392013-06-09T14:38:53.328-07:002013-06-09T14:38:53.328-07:00You breathe life back into the old ways.You breathe life back into the old ways.aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-47647746523168144342013-06-09T13:58:37.842-07:002013-06-09T13:58:37.842-07:00Just beautiful, Lisa. The land and the sea are qu...Just beautiful, Lisa. The land and the sea are quite a pair!! Both need each other and fulfill each other's needs.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-66807950535770131532013-06-09T11:35:44.796-07:002013-06-09T11:35:44.796-07:00I especially love the joyous lines in the middle o...I especially love the joyous lines in the middle of the poem. Uplifting!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-46047054463839416342013-06-09T10:56:51.374-07:002013-06-09T10:56:51.374-07:00Awe....very well put. Love the concluding lines, L...Awe....very well put. Love the concluding lines, Lisa. Beautiful...Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-46761629398675656502013-06-09T09:33:33.262-07:002013-06-09T09:33:33.262-07:00Land and water bidding against each other. How ver...Land and water bidding against each other. How very true! Nicely Lisa!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-61282316637190260742013-06-09T09:28:34.048-07:002013-06-09T09:28:34.048-07:00Loved this. Perfect description of what the land m...Loved this. Perfect description of what the land must surely feel about the ocean.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-13988871269938481242013-06-09T08:05:11.844-07:002013-06-09T08:05:11.844-07:00great piece - elemental... love "fins/of fore...great piece - elemental... love "fins/of forever" especially.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-30343047835587033332013-06-09T07:59:38.276-07:002013-06-09T07:59:38.276-07:00nice....love the ocean which is what i felt...i li...nice....love the ocean which is what i felt...i like the land is jealous for her as well...ha...nice touch that....wonderful imagery.....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-86716519111032901882013-06-09T07:34:39.132-07:002013-06-09T07:34:39.132-07:00The last 4 lines stand out for me ~ Lovely share ...The last 4 lines stand out for me ~ Lovely share ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70667057353482202192013-06-09T07:19:08.441-07:002013-06-09T07:19:08.441-07:00Such a beauty,,,of course land will ache for her.....Such a beauty,,,of course land will ache for her...Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com