tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post5460374830214562390..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: LotusLisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-27856645325940287582015-02-10T08:23:19.836-08:002015-02-10T08:23:19.836-08:00Breath-taking that last stanza chills!
mindlovem...Breath-taking that last stanza chills! <br /><br />mindlovemisery Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16157593291278155756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-16709403355731942142015-02-09T13:25:32.129-08:002015-02-09T13:25:32.129-08:00Such a compelling image.Such a compelling image.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-40943306044975640242015-02-08T16:24:43.024-08:002015-02-08T16:24:43.024-08:00such true words....
'The ransom already paid
...such true words....<br /><br />'The ransom already paid<br />by the crippled years<br />she binds to memory.'<br /><br />I have paid that ransom.Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-50700768589254295442015-02-08T16:24:29.981-08:002015-02-08T16:24:29.981-08:00The Goddess always answers a heartfelt call! (Even...The Goddess always answers a heartfelt call! (Even - or especially? - if, as Susan suggests, it is the Goddess within.)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-33641601299386748972015-02-08T16:08:08.740-08:002015-02-08T16:08:08.740-08:00I like how you show doubt binds feet, a year, a wa...I like how you show doubt binds feet, a year, a way. Perhaps she herself is the goddess she seeks.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-21403175011369149672015-02-08T14:33:22.802-08:002015-02-08T14:33:22.802-08:00Boy, I know how that feels!Boy, I know how that feels!Forgewrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16976717684813653623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-53157323235346695382015-02-08T12:48:51.831-08:002015-02-08T12:48:51.831-08:00Very succinct and well crafted.
ZQVery succinct and well crafted.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-74153871113324326282015-02-08T10:05:37.696-08:002015-02-08T10:05:37.696-08:00This is a wonderful poem. I especially love the fe...This is a wonderful poem. I especially love the feet bound by doubt, always departing, and the glorious image of her riding the dark horse under the moon. Wow!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-59341905444997287352015-02-08T09:36:51.266-08:002015-02-08T09:36:51.266-08:00Beautiful write Lisa--I so relate!Beautiful write Lisa--I so relate!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-80384103708082466122015-02-08T06:50:33.699-08:002015-02-08T06:50:33.699-08:00To be held in shackles, never blooming is sad &...To be held in shackles, never blooming is sad & haunting ~ A great metaphor to use as well ~<br /><br />Grace Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-9083403047975068982015-02-08T06:43:50.120-08:002015-02-08T06:43:50.120-08:00Those shackles of limbo, yes so many times we put ...Those shackles of limbo, yes so many times we put our hope to the night.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-32964348595024619722015-02-08T06:19:45.036-08:002015-02-08T06:19:45.036-08:00always in a posture of departure...
that line real...always in a posture of departure...<br />that line really carries the feel of this one for me lisa<br />i think we are all looking for that salvation<br />in our own wayBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-42055326391354812242015-02-08T06:02:13.826-08:002015-02-08T06:02:13.826-08:00Many seek salvation in someone or something, but I...Many seek salvation in someone or something, but I do wonder about the power of the Goddess.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-6664200909100123662015-02-08T05:37:27.186-08:002015-02-08T05:37:27.186-08:00I love that last verse...we should always keep see...I love that last verse...we should always keep seeking that thing or person who may be able to save us..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-42871751554885034622015-02-08T05:23:27.728-08:002015-02-08T05:23:27.728-08:00we are all bound in one way or another... you gave...we are all bound in one way or another... you gave us the feeling of entrapment Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.com