tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post531623602035106085..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: Build Me a CastleLisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-61728387172046397942013-09-14T01:14:54.127-07:002013-09-14T01:14:54.127-07:00Repetition of the plea makes it all the more effec...Repetition of the plea makes it all the more effective. A castle that protects us would be a good one to have. Very nice. Loved this one.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-41169902074555208522013-09-13T10:11:02.361-07:002013-09-13T10:11:02.361-07:00Thank you all so much for your comments.Thank you all so much for your comments.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-58830207947944609742013-09-12T13:48:10.963-07:002013-09-12T13:48:10.963-07:00"upon distant shores
Far away from those isla..."upon distant shores<br />Far away from those islands<br />I drifted to in my youth"<br /><br />I think this is very relatable to so many of us. Yes, a castle, a fortress to protect us--and one of "truth" that cannot be prevailed against by storm would surely be a most welcome sanctuary for our battered hearts. Sounds like a wonderful place...<br />Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-24293343607800549622013-09-12T00:19:29.889-07:002013-09-12T00:19:29.889-07:00...truth is the ultimate foundation to a happy liv......truth is the ultimate foundation to a happy living... & then love will follow & trust & respect & so on so forth... a great share to read this afternoon... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-27659407319528534252013-09-11T19:26:19.361-07:002013-09-11T19:26:19.361-07:00security, comfort, peace from the chaos and pain o...security, comfort, peace from the chaos and pain of youthful misdirection..yes, build me a castle too. nice writeDorianna (paintswithwords.comhttp://doriannasbedchamber.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-85945541428193405132013-09-11T15:59:43.225-07:002013-09-11T15:59:43.225-07:00A castle to feel protected...I need one too.A castle to feel protected...I need one too.Mademoiselle Modellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-30696516437522134382013-09-11T11:25:08.598-07:002013-09-11T11:25:08.598-07:00A castle takes on so much meaning here. A place of...A castle takes on so much meaning here. A place of safety, sanctuary, solitude. I hope someone responds to the plea. Ken Higginsonhttp://www.bananabigtime.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-38389351476163259722013-09-11T06:26:59.669-07:002013-09-11T06:26:59.669-07:00Wow Lisa that second to last stanza is so painful ...Wow Lisa that second to last stanza is so painful and so powerful. We all seek sanctuary the problem is when we never rejoin the world and remain locked awayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-47705882284903791542013-09-10T21:29:09.852-07:002013-09-10T21:29:09.852-07:00what a heartfelt requestwhat a heartfelt requestVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-986186113541136652013-09-10T19:11:11.641-07:002013-09-10T19:11:11.641-07:00we all dream to feel secure, to build this castle ...we all dream to feel secure, to build this castle for our soul...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-4493882824883560852013-09-10T15:38:01.391-07:002013-09-10T15:38:01.391-07:00"pain bled but never healed"
ouch! may..."pain bled but never healed"<br /><br />ouch! may the comfort of your castle heal you and then take you back outside the walls....HisFireFlyhttp://hisfirefly.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-12811565345601928042013-09-10T15:22:01.085-07:002013-09-10T15:22:01.085-07:00I like that the castle is a fortress of hope &...I like that the castle is a fortress of hope & love & healing all the wounds ~<br /><br />Lovely to see you at D'verse ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-85422850729997104912013-09-10T14:28:43.219-07:002013-09-10T14:28:43.219-07:00Wouldn't that be nice...Wouldn't that be nice...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-34939037974950214342013-09-10T13:46:24.775-07:002013-09-10T13:46:24.775-07:00ah we have to find that foundation well beyond wha...ah we have to find that foundation well beyond what the thought we learned as truth in our youth...life will test that and let us know if it is lacking...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-16202094037217481892013-09-10T13:39:56.072-07:002013-09-10T13:39:56.072-07:00Lisa,
A reflection on many of life's experien...Lisa,<br /><br />A reflection on many of life's experiences. Some we look back on fondly, while others we would prefer to close away. Lost to thought, or at least safely away from the world of others...Very realistic.<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-6444522249569529012013-09-10T13:02:31.595-07:002013-09-10T13:02:31.595-07:00This says much more than the words can say... love...This says much more than the words can say... love the repetitions, and such need of protection.. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-25148327718922889152013-09-10T12:51:11.931-07:002013-09-10T12:51:11.931-07:00This is a sad, but wise poem. It's almost as ...This is a sad, but wise poem. It's almost as if the castle must be someplace imaginary as it is guarding you from memories. WOnderful write.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com