tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post4995524791370288393..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: Phyllis (reposted from 10/2012)Lisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-46538069910969910252013-04-30T17:40:02.570-07:002013-04-30T17:40:02.570-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-62374474980359157142013-04-29T14:46:49.519-07:002013-04-29T14:46:49.519-07:00You truly have a poet's heart.You truly have a poet's heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-38126940294810580912013-04-24T19:22:13.626-07:002013-04-24T19:22:13.626-07:00Goodbyes are so painful. Thank you for your commen...Goodbyes are so painful. Thank you for your comment.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-23929762743645078112013-04-24T19:20:56.125-07:002013-04-24T19:20:56.125-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-41583080563049665312013-04-23T22:47:44.720-07:002013-04-23T22:47:44.720-07:00Loss spoken with such beauty. Oh, the pain in good...Loss spoken with such beauty. Oh, the pain in goodbye.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-46138189356176306812013-04-23T16:32:09.174-07:002013-04-23T16:32:09.174-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-80546419008567268722013-04-23T16:31:25.236-07:002013-04-23T16:31:25.236-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-56670114388496114532013-04-23T16:25:43.261-07:002013-04-23T16:25:43.261-07:00Beautifully written. The grief and pain is very we...Beautifully written. The grief and pain is very well shown through your choices. Can't read it without feeling it. paperdollmomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14315900640385889481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-40044225354436812592013-04-23T07:32:07.593-07:002013-04-23T07:32:07.593-07:00this is one beautiful poem about loss. the type of...this is one beautiful poem about loss. the type of poetry i wished i had written.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-58281100773341593502013-04-22T16:48:36.035-07:002013-04-22T16:48:36.035-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-23982912063981908592013-04-22T16:48:10.223-07:002013-04-22T16:48:10.223-07:00Thank you for your comment.Thank you for your comment.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-14976679050896631962013-04-22T16:47:33.302-07:002013-04-22T16:47:33.302-07:00Than you, Eileen. I love reading your poems.Than you, Eileen. I love reading your poems.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-85026245746267008982013-04-22T16:46:44.030-07:002013-04-22T16:46:44.030-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-18235729377001627212013-04-22T10:13:36.755-07:002013-04-22T10:13:36.755-07:00This is painfully beautiful. Excellent.This is painfully beautiful. Excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-53652439670392088552013-04-21T23:14:42.037-07:002013-04-21T23:14:42.037-07:00losses are terrible and yes, the world does seems ...losses are terrible and yes, the world does seems unfeeling at timesAbin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-14428439287244919242013-04-21T17:55:26.203-07:002013-04-21T17:55:26.203-07:00Lisa,
A very nicely composed poem, which affords ...Lisa,<br /><br />A very nicely composed poem, which affords a very loving tribute through your words.<br /><br />(I especially connected because of the name Phyllis...the name of my dear auntie, who is thankfully still alive at the age of 87 years and lives alone. Visiting her next week in Northern Ireland:)<br /><br />Eileen<br />Thank you for your comments at my poems Lisa:)Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-45348268059979556362013-04-21T17:24:05.713-07:002013-04-21T17:24:05.713-07:00Very Nice.
ZQVery Nice.<br />ZQAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-29485913093347663962013-04-21T17:21:29.590-07:002013-04-21T17:21:29.590-07:00This poem is about my close friend/sister in law w...This poem is about my close friend/sister in law who passed away 18 yrs. ago unexpectedly. We all miss her very much. Thank you for your comment.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-53578057677512139772013-04-21T17:19:06.991-07:002013-04-21T17:19:06.991-07:00Thank you.Thank you.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-17881732367445524212013-04-21T17:18:30.239-07:002013-04-21T17:18:30.239-07:00Thank you, Jennifer.Thank you, Jennifer.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-24237522652154453622013-04-21T17:17:56.321-07:002013-04-21T17:17:56.321-07:00Thank you, Mary.Thank you, Mary.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-90408135523556148782013-04-21T17:17:19.493-07:002013-04-21T17:17:19.493-07:00Always appreciate your comments.Always appreciate your comments.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-81264501781315533222013-04-21T13:06:24.290-07:002013-04-21T13:06:24.290-07:00I felt so sad when I read this goodbye. I hope is ...I felt so sad when I read this goodbye. I hope is was only a childhood bff moving with family to a new neighborhood across town, rather than loss to devastating disease. At least then you have the prospect of reunion.Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-40825078064508365612013-04-21T11:00:53.502-07:002013-04-21T11:00:53.502-07:00There are those moments when even the thought of g...There are those moments when even the thought of getting close to, talking with or touching another, is more than too much to even consider. Beautifully penned, well executed. <br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/04/20/after-breaking/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-52121159577636846292013-04-21T10:57:15.943-07:002013-04-21T10:57:15.943-07:00I remember this one and how I felt it epitomized g...I remember this one and how I felt it epitomized grief so perfectly. I still think so. Wonderful, Lisa.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.com