tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post2314766127842964061..comments2023-07-29T01:46:37.074-07:00Comments on Poetry: AlwaysLisa A. Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-42048144802950829012013-07-02T13:55:42.545-07:002013-07-02T13:55:42.545-07:00Thank you everyone!Thank you everyone!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-60982130317774875382013-06-30T12:51:07.383-07:002013-06-30T12:51:07.383-07:00I could have written this poem!! I definitely kno...I could have written this poem!! I definitely know what you mean by a 'castle of good-byes.' And I am one who really does not WANT things or relationships to end.... It pains me deeply when they do.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-43581520771854266432013-06-30T08:53:43.538-07:002013-06-30T08:53:43.538-07:00Very moving. Loved it all.Very moving. Loved it all.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10491075248285881857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-16209923638873372372013-06-28T07:02:35.351-07:002013-06-28T07:02:35.351-07:00soulfully sad, but each goodbye comes the opportun...soulfully sad, but each goodbye comes the opportunity of hello!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-63693763707667849882013-06-28T05:07:16.434-07:002013-06-28T05:07:16.434-07:00I am moved by this intimate knowledge of goodbye. ...I am moved by this intimate knowledge of goodbye. When I look in the mirror, I no longer see my past faces--I need photographs for that. But the faces of those I've had to say goodbye to are with me forever.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70140210093354653042013-06-27T23:42:31.576-07:002013-06-27T23:42:31.576-07:00That final stanza is just perfect. So true Lisa. ...That final stanza is just perfect. So true Lisa. Great piece!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-33925793568540091312013-06-27T13:31:45.884-07:002013-06-27T13:31:45.884-07:00Very deep and well expressed, really enjoyed it a ...Very deep and well expressed, really enjoyed it a lot.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-78421487012328052302013-06-26T22:29:56.479-07:002013-06-26T22:29:56.479-07:00I know this feeling. I have always hated goodbye.....I know this feeling. I have always hated goodbye..each one gets harder. Great piece!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-70352901968804437662013-06-26T17:53:32.709-07:002013-06-26T17:53:32.709-07:00I totally resonate with this poem - all of the add...I totally resonate with this poem - all of the additions to our lives that eventually become losses.........the person within, as opposed to the one in the mirror.......and then you totally nailed it in your two closing lines. Fantastic!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-89539291417534214402013-06-26T16:30:54.628-07:002013-06-26T16:30:54.628-07:00Lisa,
I really felt the emotional journey through...Lisa,<br /><br />I really felt the emotional journey throught life, captured in your words.<br />Perhaps since becoming a grandmother two years ago, I see life in the same way these days!!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-1371596297759337562013-06-26T15:43:01.233-07:002013-06-26T15:43:01.233-07:00So lovely Lisa--your work seems both hopeful and p...So lovely Lisa--your work seems both hopeful and poignant--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-23299976436203356582013-06-26T15:11:23.898-07:002013-06-26T15:11:23.898-07:00So very well expressed.So very well expressed.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-83459325354208658212013-06-26T14:25:18.837-07:002013-06-26T14:25:18.837-07:00Really lovely, captures life and time but with a r...Really lovely, captures life and time but with a real taste of hope.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-14700066159360138772013-06-26T11:28:47.438-07:002013-06-26T11:28:47.438-07:00Lovely and poignant!Lovely and poignant!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588609008225753446.post-75039852515709050132013-06-26T11:03:07.038-07:002013-06-26T11:03:07.038-07:00This is lovely, Lisa... I especially like the seco...This is lovely, Lisa... I especially like the second stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com